Do Over!!!

Remember when we were kids and if you didn't like a play in football or missed a shot playing horse, you'd scream do over and get another shot at it. It's kind of like a mulligan in golf.
Well, I apparently have people reading this that I didn't think were out there. I was going to stop publishing the Short Story, "The Truth" on this blog, because I've been getting some flack from the people I work with. I don't know if they are serious by giving me a hard time about it, or if they are kidding, but I've been rather embarrassed about the whole thing, so I was going to end my embarrassment, and I removed the first two parts of the story today.It's hard for me to imagine that people are out there and reading the ramblings I write here. I was asked what happened to the story this afternoon by a dear friend, and was told that several people that I care about were actually reading it. I was asked to continue with it, and I have agreed, but I would really like some feed back from you all. Serious feedback, just try not to hurt this old fool's feelings, (yes I have them), If you like what I've written then say so. If you think its drivel, then don't read it. I'm embarrassed to say that even my own wife hasn't read it. That's kind of the straw that broke the camels back; I figured I was making a fool out of myself.Anyway, be aware that I did not originally write a preface to this story, it was written when I decided to blog it, and when I deleted the entries I lost it, as well as some grammatical and punctuation errors that I made after I entered it to the blog. I have discovered while getting used to this way of entering posts. You can't copy the changes back out. At least I haven't figured out how to do it yet. So I will put the entries as I originally typed them during the translation of my chicken scratch. Again I'm sorry Jodie, (my assistant) and God Bless You for putting up with me. I will continue the story when I finish typing each section.Thanks Tami, for encouraging me to continue. To those of you at work, nany nany ha ha :-) I'm going to do it anyway, don't care what you say. Latah Mon!